

Catching the signal from one of her friends, Angela brushed her skirt, took a deep breath and walked towards where he was sitting. "Hey Pedro, whats up?" said Angela with a big smirk painted across her face." Hey Angela whats up. " said Pedro.
Pedro and Angela talked for 10 min. Soon after they were done talking and Pedro had left, Angela's best friend came out of the bushes with a loud "WUSH". "So how did it go?" said Bartola, with a very suspicious look on her face.
"Well I asked him out but he said he had a girlfriend already."said Angela with, an unhappy voice tone.
"Wait a minute Pedro does not have a girlfriend!" said Bartola "How would you know?"said Angela with a confuse looking face. "Angela, would I ever lie to you?"said Bartola with her snow colored face and eyes like two green emeralds that looked at you when you stared at them.
Ahah the names were rad..
ReplyDeleteI liked how you said, "her snow colored face and eyes like two green emeralds"
that gave me a really good visual!